“Premise” and “concept” are interchangeable terms in the industry. And concept is king. Because an executive will have an easier time recommending their boss read a script with a great concept as opposed to a great character or a great world. To break it down to a formula: killer concept + actor bait roles + professional grade execution = sale. (Or at least way better odds of a sale.) So step 1 for me is always figuring out the right concept. As far as TV goes, the big question I ask myself is: does my concept self-generate storylines? I learned the hard way that a pilot script HAS to both set up the show and act as an example of what future episodes will be like. A few years back I wrote a modern day version of the Camelot myth where the knights were the villains and Guinevere was the hero. The script was fun enough to get me a lot of meetings, but it never sold. Because no one (myself included) could say what episode 2 or 5 or 50 would look like based on the pilot. So for the next project I took out after that, I went for something where there was a REALLY clear story engine powering the show. It was an adaptation of a book about a guy who spends his afterlife being bounced into the bodies of bad guys and having to right their wrongs, like “Quantum Leap” meets “Dexter.” That premise always provided a clear answer as to what episode 2 or 5 or 50 would be like. And while it never got made, that one did find a buyer. And was much easier to pitch. Thank you for coming to my TedTalk Answer from haynesholiday on reddit.com
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r/Screenwriting on Reddit: What is your approach to premise in your writing?
February 13, 2023 -

I've just been reading through The Art of Dramatic Writing by Lajos Egri, and if you know the work, you'll know that he spends a great deal of time on premise and how essential it is. What's your approach? Do you establish a premise and seek to write to it or do you start writing first and hope to reach a premise that will then inform the rest of the work?

When Egri was writing he was specifically advising on playwriting. I'm presently developing a TV show and would be interested to hear your thoughts on how you might apply your premise to a several season arc, a single season and a single episode. Would your episode be only a partial presentation of the overall premise or would you be repeating the premise in some way in every episode?

This is just to generate a general discussion. I'd be interested in everyone's thoughts on the significance of premise.

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“Premise” and “concept” are interchangeable terms in the industry. And concept is king. Because an executive will have an easier time recommending their boss read a script with a great concept as opposed to a great character or a great world. To break it down to a formula: killer concept + actor bait roles + professional grade execution = sale. (Or at least way better odds of a sale.) So step 1 for me is always figuring out the right concept. As far as TV goes, the big question I ask myself is: does my concept self-generate storylines? I learned the hard way that a pilot script HAS to both set up the show and act as an example of what future episodes will be like. A few years back I wrote a modern day version of the Camelot myth where the knights were the villains and Guinevere was the hero. The script was fun enough to get me a lot of meetings, but it never sold. Because no one (myself included) could say what episode 2 or 5 or 50 would look like based on the pilot. So for the next project I took out after that, I went for something where there was a REALLY clear story engine powering the show. It was an adaptation of a book about a guy who spends his afterlife being bounced into the bodies of bad guys and having to right their wrongs, like “Quantum Leap” meets “Dexter.” That premise always provided a clear answer as to what episode 2 or 5 or 50 would be like. And while it never got made, that one did find a buyer. And was much easier to pitch. Thank you for coming to my TedTalk
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To me, premise relates to theme, and both are somewhat vague/overlapping concepts. I often discover theme only after I've written the story. Craig Mazin (HBO’s Chernobyl and The Last of Us and the Scriptnotes podcast) says structure is all about theme. He says it’s about asking what your character believes at the beginning, and what you want that character to believe at the end. The structure of a script thus arises out of the character confronting, and wrestling with, that thematic question. He talks about it here: https://johnaugust.com/2019/scriptnotes-ep-403-how-to-write-a-movie-transcript Another way to think about premise is "what is your story REALLY about," which often means addressing a theme or subject metaphorically. For example, there are thousands of stories about vampires. These can be "really" about any number of things, including: fear of immigrants racial discrimination AIDS or other STDs fear of sexuality obsession with virginity and its loss; controlling the sexuality of women sexuality as empowerment celebrating LGBTQ sexuality the morality of being a carnivore the ennui of eternal life sexual harassment/assault conflicts within and between minority communities
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SCRIPT NOTES: Where Story Begins - Premise - Script Magazine
January 8, 2016 - Where did you stray from it, and what did you forget? I always start there. When you need to cut pages, go back to the premise and ask yourself what scenes aren't making a compelling argument on one side or the other. This is extremely helpful when a writer overwrites a first draft and isn't sure at first what to cut. Cut what has nothing to do with premise. From first to final draft, premise is the key to clarity, vision, and voice of a film...
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What is your approach to premise in your writing?
“Premise” and “concept” are interchangeable terms in the industry. And concept is king. Because an executive will have an easier time recommending their boss read a script with a great concept as opposed to a great character or a great world. To break it down to a formula: killer concept + actor bait roles + professional grade execution = sale. (Or at least way better odds of a sale.) So step 1 for me is always figuring out the right concept. As far as TV goes, the big question I ask myself is: does my concept self-generate storylines? I learned the hard way that a pilot script HAS to both set up the show and act as an example of what future episodes will be like. A few years back I wrote a modern day version of the Camelot myth where the knights were the villains and Guinevere was the hero. The script was fun enough to get me a lot of meetings, but it never sold. Because no one (myself included) could say what episode 2 or 5 or 50 would look like based on the pilot. So for the next project I took out after that, I went for something where there was a REALLY clear story engine powering the show. It was an adaptation of a book about a guy who spends his afterlife being bounced into the bodies of bad guys and having to right their wrongs, like “Quantum Leap” meets “Dexter.” That premise always provided a clear answer as to what episode 2 or 5 or 50 would be like. And while it never got made, that one did find a buyer. And was much easier to pitch. Thank you for coming to my TedTalk More on reddit.com
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Best movie premises?

Groundhog Day

Intacto

The Cabin In The Woods

Swiss Army Man

Being John Malkovich

Dawn Of The Planet Of The Apes

The Innocents, 2021

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What are some examples of an interesting movie premise being ruined by the presence of a movie star?

Ridley Scott was once going to make Nottingham, a flip the script story about the Sheriff of Nottingham using period accurate forensic skills to track down a killer/terrorist (Robin Hood).

Studio and Russell Crowe just wanted a normal generic Robin Hood movie, so that's what got made.

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[Premise] Reddit: The Movie - The Reddit Film Project has chosen this as its concept. I'd love to get your feedback.
Not a fan of the treatment at all. An inspirational movie about reddit just seems kind of cringeworthy. Best of luck either way. More on reddit.com
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How Do You Define the Premise of a Movie or TV Show? | No Film School
Super basics to start: the premise of a screenplay for a movie or TV show is the driving force behind why everything happens on screen. This refers to the motive or goal of the story.
Published   October 6, 2024
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How to Ensure Your Story Has a Strong Premise - 2026 - MasterClass
August 23, 2021 - 2. Your protagonist’s goal: A solid premise will also include a simple explanation of what your main character desires or needs. 3. The situation or obstacle: What crisis or extraordinary situation does your protagonist find themselves in? Writer’s block affects even the best writers.
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What Is a Premise in Writing And How To Find It - Scriptwriting Tips
August 10, 2021 - While you’re writing your own screenplay try to think what is the most interesting, the most attracting thing in your idea; what is the most unique element of your idea that you don’t see it often in other films. After you find it, try to highlight it and to use it to lure people and producers to love your story. Make this your premise in your writing.
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What is the Premise of a Story — Definition and Examples
May 28, 2025 - The what if questions are a way to brainstorm different circumstances that can lead to a premise and eventually a story. For example you might ask what if a teenage boy was able to time travel? What if time was the currency of the future? What if there was another rockstar phenomenon in the '60s? Here is a great video by Film Courage on six essential questions to ask yourself when creating a story and a premise.
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Story Premise Examples: 500 Sample Story Premise/Loglines to Work From – Invisible Themepark
I have trimmed down the list to story premises that are only 50 words or less and are generally one to two sentences long.
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1. Story Premise and Originality | Cyber Film School
March 20, 2023 - This post is a support article for the chapter “Screenwriting” in Cyber Film School’s Multi-Touch Filmmaking Textbook. ... When you are ready to write, crystallize your concept into a two to three-sentence description, commonly called a premise or brief.
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How to Develop Your Premise into a Compelling Script
How to Develop Your Premise into a Compelling Script by Kathryn McCullough · In my fifteen years of working as a story analyst for film companies, I have found that most of the scripts I read fall short of success because the author has failed to develop the story beyond the initial set-up.
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How to Write an Amazing Film Synopsis (Step-by-step Guide) | Boords
A Google Docs template with space for title, genre, logline (a one-sentence summary), and a five-paragraph explanation of the film’s storyline, major plot points, and key characters.Copy Template · Before you dive in and start writing your script synopsis, make sure you get to know the basic formatting principles. At the top of the synopsis, write your script's title and state that it's a synopsis.
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Script Writing Classes Your Story Premise - Movie School Free
March 26, 2021 - The story premise is the leading force behind what we do in real life. In storytelling, the Premise of the concept that leads the plot and the characters in the story. Every scene in your movie needs to ad something to the main premise of the film or else it will be formless.
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What Is The Premise Of A Story [With Examples & Tutorials]
March 13, 2025 - Writers can create a compelling premise by starting with a bold question or high-concept idea, thoroughly exploring the world and the lives of their characters, revising their premise through different iterations and feedback, and keeping the audience in mind...
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Cyber Film School
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Premise vs. Theme: Know The Difference | Cyber Film School
December 12, 2024 - The premise becomes evident early in the process as you flesh out the characters, their circumstances and conflicts – the ‘what if…but’? For example, “Jaws” (1975): What if a beach-town cop wants to stop a killer shark at the height of tourist season, but as deaths pile up, the greedy mayor blocks him for the sake of tourist dollars? The theme speaks to the film’s overall moral or lesson it teaches – the overall message.
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What Is a Premise in Writing And How To Find It - YouTube
PREMISE - What is Premise in Script Writing and How to Write One - Screenwriting Basics - Screenwriting 101[English and Greek subs available.Επιλέξτε να δείτ...
Published   July 30, 2021
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Premise (narrative) - Wikipedia
January 7, 2026 - Redirects to Wiktionary · Search · Premise (narrative) 5 languages Add topic
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From Idea to Premise – From Idea to Screen: The Basics of Screenwriting
May 2, 2024 - This is just a basic idea. We call this idea the PREMISE. The premise for a movie often starts with something like “What if…” or “Wouldn’t it be cool…” or “It would be exciting if…” or “It would be heartbreaking if…” Generally, it starts with something that simple.
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Your Screenplay Guy
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Finding a Story's Premise in Screenwriting | Your Screenplay Guy
March 24, 2023 - In his book, The Art of Dramatic ... premise is the foundation of your story and should be a concise statement that provides a clear direction for your story and your characters....
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Stavroshalvatzis
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How to write a strong dramatic premise. - The story blueprint
May 22, 2022 - 2. Ensure that the premise statement is clear and contains a strong set-up and pay-off: Here’s an example: The daughter of a callous hospital director is abducted by an ex-surgeon whose child has failed to qualify for a liver transplant and has died as a consequence (set-up).
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How To Develop A Movie Premise - Jeff Kitchen
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What Is A Premise In Writing? Start Your Story Strong – Jericho Writers
May 9, 2025 - Whether you are writing a query letter, or sending your agent a summary of your latest book, being able to write a premise line is key. This sometimes means conveying the central idea in just one sentence – a little like an elevator pitch. If you can sell a story idea to an agent in one breath, then that means they too can sell it to an editor, who can hook distributors and media, who in turn will convince readers to buy it. Explaining a clear premise in a condensed way is also a good test for a writer as to whether an idea is viable or not.